Friday poem
“Your Luck Is About To Change” by Susan Elizabeth Howe
(A fortune cookie)
Ominous inscrutable Chinese news
to get just before Christmas,
considering my reasonable health,
marriage spicy as moo-goo-gai-pan,
career running like a not-too-old Chevrolet.
Not bad, considering what can go wrong:
the bony finger of Uncle Sam
might point out my husband,
my own national guard,
and set him in Afghanistan;
my boss could take a personal interest;
the pain in my left knee could spread to my right.
Still, as the old year tips into the new,
I insist on the infant hope, gooing and kicking
his legs in the air. I won’t give in
to the dark, the sub-zero weather, the fog,
or even the neighbors’ Nativity.
Their four-year-old has arranged
his whole legion of dinosaurs
so they, too, worship the child,
joining the cow and sheep. Or else,
ultimate mortals, they’ve come to eat
ox and camel, Mary and Joseph,
then savor the newborn babe.
From Poetry (December 2002)




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Okay, I’m laughing at the image of the dinosaurs. Perfect.
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I love it.
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Even though nthis had a Nativity in it – would someone please shoot me
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I like it also (not sure I’ll go so far as to say I love it). The images are so evocative (”the infant hope, gooing and kicking
his legs in the air”), the similes and metaphors so apt, and the ideas all ones I can relate to.
I have to admit, though, that I got to the end and had to start again at the title to figure out what the fortune cookie said. Duh! (As my husband sayss, for a smart person I can be very dense sometimes.)
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Pauline (#4), that happens to me all the time, esp. with e-mail. For some reason, I never read the subject line so often am confused by the message.
I enjoyed this poem. As others have said, the images are very evocative. I like the dinosaurs, too.
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Very nice selection. Thanks, Harrison.
I relate to the persona at this moment in my life. Enough said!
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The dinosaurs! Yes!!
I also liked the line about the “infant hope..” That was a very nice picture, too.
As to poetry, just stumbled onto the poems for the Poetry Out Loud contest. Ran into some old favorites there, and some that left me scratching my head. Lots of material to look over.
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So I thought of this poem over the weekend, when the five-year-old daughter set up the Nativity. She chose front and center under the Christmas tree, where the cats can’t knock down the Baby Jesus.
Once the figures were carefully placed, she put the angel down on the ground, and the Holy Infant high on the stairs so everyone could see Him better. Then the Fisher Price Little People and Polly Pockets all drove over, parked their cars, and lined up to see the Baby as well.
Finally, the Holy Family, shepherds, and magi, all went to visit the Little People at their home. Just like us, they decided to welcome Jesus into their home.
I suspect they’ll all visit Polly when the asked-for gift of a Polly House is received on Christmas.
They may be more literal, but sometimes, kids seem to get things very well that we adults miss.
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#8 They may be more literal, but sometimes, kids seem to get things very well that we adults miss.”
ChristianLeftist,
My son decided this weekend he wanted to tell the Easter story instead of the Christmas story, and asked me to get out the “Easter Eggs” that we use to tell the story of Jesus’ last week of his earthly life (similar to the commercially available Resurrection Eggs, but I made my own set). I started to object that it was Advent and why didn’t he just use his nativity set to tell the Christmas story. Then I thought better of it and decided that there was no wrong time to tell the Easter story. (Mostly I just didn’t feel like getting out of my warm comfy chair and going into the basement to search for the eggs in the holiday box.)
He started with the donkey, which is for Palm Sunday. “Jesus rode the donkey, and all the people were waving pom-poms.”
I try not to laugh when he makes mistakes, but this was just so perfect! Waving pom-poms for a celebration makes so much more sense to a modern 8-year-old than waving palms. Fortunately he wasn’t bothered by my gentle correction (he did know, after all, what palm branches were, he had just forgotten), and went on with his story.
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