Comments on: Friday poem

By: Chas

Chas — Fri, 14 Mar 2008 23:04:55 +0000

HSK, I like it. It has rythm and it rhymes. I didn’t have any trouble reading it, but going back to reread, I agree with Galadriel.

Galadriel — Fri, 14 Mar 2008 22:03:22 +0000

I like it, but I can’t get over the second to last line in the first stanza. Why didn’t he just write “Soon, swifter” or “Much swifter”?

Peter L — Fri, 14 Mar 2008 16:57:28 +0000

Cute poem. I like the ending, so typical of a young boy.

BTW- Is this poem being used because of the B.D.’s exploding pen the other day? (Re: the line my pen leaked on my shirt.)

llama — Fri, 14 Mar 2008 16:50:12 +0000

And he knows how to make a poem rhyme too! It proves there is a God.

This must be one of HSK’s ‘Rhyming On’ weeks.

Scroop Moth — Fri, 14 Mar 2008 15:16:37 +0000

Prelutsky is the greatest thing since Mother Goose.