Friday poem
“Ultrasound” by A.E. Stallings
What butterfly—
Brain, soul, or both—
Unfurls here, pallid
As a moth?
(Listen, here’s
Another ticker,
Counting under
Mine, and quicker.)
In this cave
What flickers fall,
Adumbrated
On the wall?
Spine like beads
Strung on a wire,
Abacus
Of our desire,
Moon-face where
Two shadows rhyme,
Two moving hands
That tell the time.
I am the room
The future owns,
The darkness where
It grows its bones.
(From 32 Poems.)




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This may be my favorite-est poem I’ve ever posted here. It’s killer. A.E. Stallings is unstoppable.
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Well, I like it. It’s got robustness. It’s got soul.
I especially like the last stanza.
There is a punch that words can deliver.
This does.
I’m not sure what is is actually about, although I could conjecture but will keep that to myself.
I just like the thing.
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Well, I DO know overall what it is about (an ultrasound); just not sure of every bit of the imagery. But again, I like it.
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HSK at #1 — I couldn’t agree more. Meticulously gorgeous.
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Wow! I’m blown away. It is equisite.
I like the third stanza. It’s an allusion to Socrates’s Allegory of the Cave in Plato’s Republic, I think.
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Thank goodness for the title! It is awesome as is a baby in one’s womb!!
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What is the reference to ‘moon-face where two shadows rhyme, two hands telling time part about, exactly?
Everything else is clear, and very beautiful to me.
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I think “moon face” probably refers to how white and round the face is on the sonogram image. I’m think the “two shadows” are the eye sockets. They “rhyme” because they are identical and side by side. The “hands” are obviously being compared to clock hands, I think because they are often at some angle to each other, and when viewed from one perspective might cover the face as clock hands cover the face of a clock. Also, they move–which is an indication of elapsed time and of the baby’s being alive.
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Am I the only one who had trouble figuring out what the poem was about? To me, the title referred to technology that uses “vibrations of the same physical nature as sound but with frequencies above the range of human hearing” (dictionary definition). I used to work for a company that made ultrasonic equipment, and my personal experience of ultrasonic equipment is for cleaning and/or sterilizing (e.g. medical implements).
Only after I read the first few comments here did I remember that for most people the most common application of the technology is a non-invasive examination of a pregnant woman’s womb.
Now the poem makes sense, and yes it is a good poem. But I was really puzzled when I first read it.
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